Feedback from groups

U2-63
good variety of camera shots
appealed to modern audience, because of scenery and characters.
Not always dark, lightning kept changing.
soundtrack doesn't really fit to theme of thriller


U2-64
Appealed to audience
Blood didn't look realistic looked liked ketchup
Liked soundtrack, the constant guitar.

What People Thought Of Our Opening Thriller Clip

Feedback

- Good camera work, over the shoulder shots worked effectively
- We should make titles longer so people can read them
- It's a short duration
- The dark bits we need to lighten up
- Music desperately needs to be added to create the right thriller mood.

ROUGH CUT

here is our rough cut for our thriller opening,

Thursday 11th March Update

Today we found some suitable music for our thriller film, we decided to use orchestra music to build dramatic tension, to draw the viewer in and create an emotional feel to the film, however we had some problems trying to fit in the music and so we decided to upload our clip without it, we then put this into garage band.
Verity finished off the credits which look effective. During the car scene, we made the lighting go from light, to dark, to light, and during the dark bit we put in some white typewriter credits, which looked affective.

We then asked Barney for some more sound effects as the ones we had on garage band weren't suitable, We are now looking through and picking the ones we need.

We are now uploading our clip to youtube, so we can get the embed and upload it to blogger.com

Rough Cut

today is our deadline for out rough cut for our thriller opening and we have to make sure that our opening for our thriller is up to scratch and put it onto youtube then the blog.
we need to make sure that our opening has credits and effects and need to make sure we have a soundtrack for it...

tomorrow we will be watching the other peoples rough cuts in our class and giving feedback on things that they can do to improve it.

filming and music

today we were looking at music for out opening scene, we found it hard as there is not much music on garage band that fits to out opening scene, eventually we found some that we may use but we will carry in looking next lesson.
i was editing the opening scene and adding credits to it, i found it hard as it was difficult to add it smoothly into the clips, also there was no font that we liked as we don't have the text we had before for our opening scene.

Tuesday 9th March

Today we concentrated on editing our film a bit more. We added credits to our film and Adam worked on garage band to add some music to create suspense for the thriller effect. We had some trouble with garage band music, as the music that we imported to go with the film was too happy.

Targets

targets for what we want to achieve

-experiment with effects and find ones that enhance the footage

-experiment with credits and find out where to put them on the footage

-experiment with garageband to find music that fits to out footage

-experiment with fades and making the clips link together smoothly

-once finished get timing right for clips and music and any special effects added.

Editing Thriller

Today we captured our thriller footage and started to edit.
Our opening scene consists of showing I-dent which will then fade out and show the victim lying on the floor. We chose the Fade effect because it makes the transition between look a lot better. We then introduce the main character and show her writing down notes.

At first we had difficulties with the scene were the character walks to her car but we managed to crop and edit out the dolly in the background. We had to choose which angle the character was being filmed from as she got in the car and eventually chose an over the shoulder. The scene where the car shown going down the driveway needed to be darker. We noticed that the next scene where she gets out if the car it is night so it does not look as fluent. We managed to find a colour corrector to make the scene darker but still haven't found the right so the brightness keeps changing. We made small changes and managed to make the scene look right.

One idea that was changed was that we didn't have a suspect sheet but instead we had an article on the computer. At the end we noticed that the length of the opening was slightly more than 2 minutes so decided to either shorten a scene or cut them.

Filming,

yesterday i went and filmed all the footage for our thriller opening, i used two of my fiends (sian bell and jack cootes) as the two characters in the footage, we used ketchup for the blood and chalk for the outline around the body to give it the crime scene effect, and a brick as a murder weapon next to him with blood on, we then had scenes of the body showing the body lying on the floor and setting the scene, these will be used at the beginning of the opening for the thriller, we then filmed clip of the policewoman taking notes of the scene and used different shots, for example, over the shoulder looking at what she is writing and you can see the body in the background. we then filmed her walking over to the car and getting into the car and turning the radio on, we shot this from different angles and did a close up of her hand opening the car door. I then filmed a person driving down the drive were the police woman lives, we used a yellow pot on the car giving the car a police status, we then filmed her getting out the car and walking into the house, we used the camera hand healed then to give the impression she is being followed, the clip ends when she closed the door and continues when she is in the kitchen and sits down and looks at the folders in front of her and looks up at the camera then ends when the camera ducks down, making it seem the person following her is hiding. The footage ends with her typing on the laptop a document regarding the death.

I feel the filming went well and i am pleased with the results and think it will work well when it has been edited.

props

Today we are going to film for our thriller film, we will need props including:
-white chalk
-fake blood
-pictures of suspects
-paperwork
-laptop
-folders..
I am going to find these things around the house and get picturs of suspects from the internet and print them, will make the blood from tomato ketchup and water and use my laptop.

Proffesional Thriller Film

Find a youtube clip of a director who you think creates similar films to the one you are making. Post a clip of one of their films that are similar to yours and post a clip of them talking about their film.

movie trailer to sherlock holmes: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QUQbmFAE5WI&feature=fvw

Our Target audience

Our target audience would be about 12+ years of age, this because it would appeal to a maturer audience as it will have a serious plot line dealing with real world issues, to do with teenage life and manic depression, we made it a 12 so people or similar age to the characters staring in our trailer. We believe this is the most suitable age as a younger audience it would not attract their interests as much. Our opening scene would be unsuitable for children under 12, as our ideas can be quite scary and could be quite disturbing for children. For example the flashes of the knife in and out of scenes.

Target Audience Questionairre.

question 1.
Would you prefer a male or a female as the main character?.

question 2.
What is your favourite thriller film and why?

question 3.
What excites you in a thriller film?

question 4.
How important is an I-dent to you in thriller?

question 5.
Does the soundtrack matter in a thriller film?

Target audience

Our target audience is aged 15 - 30 as the story line is complicated and requires the audience to pay attention, we do this by having the content at the BFI standard and staying inside the guidelines. In our 2 minute sequence we don't include any bad language or sexual content, but the clip contains a graphic picture of a dead person on the floor.

The BBFC permits the following within the bounds of the 15 certificate:

Theme: No theme is prohibited, provided the treatment is appropriate to 15 year olds.

Language: There may be frequent use of strong language; the strongest terms are only rarely acceptable. Continued aggressive use of strong language and sexual abuse is unacceptable.

Nudity: There are no constraints on nudity in a non-sexual or educational context.

Sex: Sexual activity and nudity may be portrayed but without strong detail. The depiction of casual sex should be handled responsibly. There may be occasional strong verbal references to sexual behaviour.

Violence: Violence may be strong but may not dwell on the infliction of pain, and of injuries. Scenes of sexual violence must be discreet and brief.

Imitable techniques: Dangerous combat techniques such as ear claps, head-butts and blows to the neck are unlikely to be acceptable. There may be no emphasis on the use of easily accessible lethal weapons (in particular, knives).

Horror: Sustained or detailed infliction of pain or injury is unacceptable.

Drugs: Drug taking may be shown but clear instructive detail is unacceptable. The film as a whole must not promote or encourage drug use.

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